I tried to open the door. It was closed, tried pushing it but it didn’t budge and then panic stuck. Is it self-locked? Will he know how to open the lock? But then he is alert, he would have cried if the closed door didn’t open even when I pushed it. So it meant he had locked it deliberately.
‘Open’, I said
‘No’, he replied
‘Why?’
‘I am angry with you that is why’.
I sighed. It was tit for tat. I do the same when I am angry with him. The situation was same only our positions were different.
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I love writing 100 words. more than 55 word fiction. The latter I feel is like Headline News.
So when Corinne introduced it at Everyday Gyan, I was ecstatic.
But then I was too busy to take part. 100 words is not exactly easy. Writing something which makes sense in just 100 words needs a ‘free’ mind and last couple of weeks I have hadn’t any – either free mind or time. Today I had both and so here is the entry. Today’s prompt is closed door.
Hope you all like it, it is one of the mother-son moments which I wanted to record for posterity.
Aah
I loved it !!!!
Arey I go to ur space, you come here, telepathy eh?
Glad that u loved this post Smita
Nice one. I knew it was a mom-son thing. Have had some of those myself
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Such a cute on, Bhagya! Thanks for joining in.
My pleasure Corinne
Nice…the familiar scene playing out.
Yes, indeed. Thanks for stopping by Janaki
All mothers are familiar with it! You expressed it nicely, Bhagya!
And such moments I want to tresure forever.
Thanks Sandhyakka
Nice one.Who said writing 55 Word fiction is difficult? It is so addictive.
Thank you.
I didn’t say 55ers are difficult, its just that I don’t like them much
Nice read. You prove ‘brevity is the soul of wit’
Thanks Easwar and welcome to SS
Nice one to read, but real scary if it is an accident.
O h yes. one of the things which we taught early to the kid was to open doors
Loved it. Something that’s been going on in my life a lot lately
Well it is just the beginning, aage aage dekho hota hai kya
beautiful and light post.
Cheers
Vishal
http://www.vishalbheeroo.wordpress.com
Thanks Vishal and welcome to SS
Thanks:))
A scene every parent has gone through many times over. A nice take on the prompt.
Thanks Suzy and welcome to SS