The car.

I read some 55 fiction and if you know me . you will also gather how eager I must be to write one. It’s both exciting and tricky to express an idea within 55 words. But the best part is that I can work it out all in the mind and sitting or staring at the screen is minimal; which suits me just fine. 🙂 So here goes….


He looked at it, the bright red car which almost looked like real,with its black tyres and its spotless ‘mirrors’. He scowled at his mother. Why keep it so far in the middle of the bed. A thought struck, he smiled and pulled the bedspread towards him. There, he had it in his hand.

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