The bliss that I have; lost in my love, can you feel it? Nah you can’t.
I dance, I sing, I read; all lost in my trance, How does it feel, you ask?
Like an arid land, when it soaks in the first raindrops; a little pain and then instant bliss.
Like when you have gooseberries and have water, ahh the taste, delicious bliss.
Can you imagine it now, my total bliss?
The surrender, the acceptance, the engulfing, all so bitter sweet, so pure; so lovely, nothing can, nothing will be ever so blissful again.
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This post has been submitted as a part of Velvet verbosity’s 100 word challenge. The word this week is Unconscious. In case you wonder about the link between the word and the title of my post, well you see, I am unconscious in my bliss.
lovely,wishes for the competition
Thanks AA
Being unconscious in bliss sounds blissful indeed. A perfect use of the theme Bhagya. Kudos!
Thanks, Bliss was the first word that came in my mind when I saw the word prompt and I used that. 😉
Good one! I like yours a lot. You should attempt more of these challenges…Really happy to see you participate.
🙂 The word prompt prompted me. I will try to compete again, can fit in 100 word challenges in busy schedules. Can just fit it in the mind and type it in minutes
Nice and hope you win.
🙂 There is no winning or losing here Rachna, its just a challenge. And indeed its challenging to write in 100 words the thoughts which u get by the word prompt, becoz often we tend to elaborate
Loved this!
Glad 😀
I like your take on the prompt, it was very creative.
Thanks Tara and welcome to my space 🙂
I like that Unconscious in your bliss.. ah ha Nice one ..
Bikram’s
🙂 Thanks Bikram
Beautifully rendered , given the theme was so complex and simple at the same time. The state of bliss or pure content is perhaps one of the wonderful feelings that satisfy both the conditions of complexity and simplicity. Well done.
My …my you are really reading all my old posts. I had to go and read the post again to understand what you were talking about. 🙂 Thank you