She turned around and saw him; lying on his back. Right hand at an angle, right leg too in an angle. The expression on his face that of shock, eyes like saucers, the hair on his forehead standing out, ears protruding. Perfect expression of shock, she chuckled to herself.
The scene too was perfect, the room in the woods, no witnesses, the walk that they had taken, so no tyre marks, her soft boots which left very soft footprints. The blood trickled down, drop by drop from the wound in the chest.
She chuckled again.
Perfectionism; that was her motto.
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The word this week for Velvet Verbosity’s 100 words challenge is ‘Perfectionism’.
I know it’s a bit gruesome but so what I had fun writing it. 😛
OH MY.. PERFECT.. I need some lessons from Her.. as need a few KILLS to be done MUUUUU HA HA HA HAHAH …
Will she teach me the art 🙂 PLEASeeeeeeeeeeee.
That was fast and first 😉
He he, just wanted to write something different.
But I must say feel honored to get this comment from a ‘policewala’ he he
LOL 😛 I hope am nt in ur bad books Bik
🙂 😀
That was indeed morbid perfectionism. Didn’t know you enjoyed it 🙂
LOL, actually I always think of such plots whenever I c our politicians on TV. 🙂
Really scary and perfect Bhagya,in a few words you have conveyed a lot.
Thanks for the compliment Chitra
oooooooooohhh! A dangerous killer on the run…..Job well done, both you and she :-)!
:P, Yes lets C how the police crack this case 😉
Thanks K2S
Aha, a very morbid kind of perfectionism – the perfect crime.
Well done! I mean You the reporter of course. 😀
HE he Thanks Debo, just wanted to try something new
Ok scary but thrilling, a great attempt in such few words. Let me know what your husband’s reaction is when he reads this 😀
Thanks Rachna. No he is not going to read it………..I am scary enough 😉
Chilling in a very good way!
Welcome M, glad to see you here.
Thank u for the comment
Oh I like this. Kinda creepy but in a good way. Nicely played.
Thanks Tara.
Had thought of first of a housewife finicky about cleanliness but then this plot came to mind and enjoyed doing it. 😀
LOVE this 😀
also: gruesome pieces are often the most fun to write 😉
Welcome to my space Aurora and thank u.
I agree such pieces let creativity come out in full force 🙂
Oooohhhh…love it. The perfect crime 🙂
visiting from 100 words
Welcome to my space Carrie and glad that u liked this post 🙂
Very chilling….. wow.
Thanks Arctic wren, had fun writing this. To communicate in a limited words is fun indeed.
Welcome to Searching self
Very well written 🙂
Thanks Swaram
Me likey! lol!
Thanks for the Friday afternoon chuckle.
Welcome to SS Whitney and glad that I could make u smile 😀
bwahahaha! wicked! LOVE!
😀 Sometimes it is so satisfying to be wicked 😛
Welcome to my space Barbara
Loved it; but I’m kinda bias cuz I wrote about crime for the challenge too!
Ha ha
I saw ur post too but I think we 2 go on slightly different tracks; isn’t it?