Those eyes... those big eyes like lotus blooming in a pond, could drive anyone crazy.
I fell for her. We could spend hours. Me gazing at her eyes. She amused at my gaze.
Her eyes spoke. Of love, of lust, of need. She moved in and I would be with her every second, to see her yawn and see the eyes getting narrow. To see her open her beautiful eyes in the morning . To see her teary eyed, to see her eyes laugh.
And then I woke up one day to see her gone with every single possession of mine.
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As part of 100 words on Saturday.
Sad – but so believable these days! 🙂
Yes but then love on physical looks alone does crash out like this, isn’t it?
Oh God! Poor Guy. 🙂
Yes, Poor poor guy
A good twist
🙂 Thank you
Ouch! Not-so-beautiful eyes?? 🙂 Good one, Reema.
ha ha, yes.
Thank you Punam
hhehe..thriller about love and deceit. Superbly written:)
Thanks Vishal, where had you been all these days?
I’ve been here only. was lil’ busy sorting out some stuffs..heheh
Okay 🙂
Bechara 😦
Yes, bechara pyaar ka maara 😀
A beautiful deceit!!
That’s a nice one for the prompt!
Thanks Shilpa
😀 loved it.
😀 Glad
we had a poem in cbse english textbook called la belle dame sans merci on similar grounds by keats.
instantly one gets attracted to physical beauty.am fond of pretty and wise girls.but we hardly find pretty and wise(good) woman.pretty girls are so demanding and have high expectations beyond moral grounds which makes them unwise or bad.did ya ever see a wise and pretty woman in real life?
And who will be the judge of that? A person has to be perfect himself to determine someone wise oe pretty
Very sad .Poor Guy!! A very appropriate take for the Prompt
Somehow deceit came to my mind with this prompt, don’t know why.
A very good piece of writing….All the best
Thank you and welcome to my space
The pleasure is all mine….
😀
A trust shattered. Poor guy.
Nice take on the prompt, bhagyashree!
Yes 😦
Thanks Deepa
nice…
thanks
🙂 Welcome to my space
Oh Oh! Sad. Nice take
😦 Thanks Jaish
This has happened…well written.
Thank you Janki
So sad! He must have been devastated!
Must be…. 😦
Hahaha….awww..I thought you would say, she passed 😛
🙂 but there has to be a twist na
A brilliant twist that is all too common. He should have probably been paying a little less attention to her eyes and more to everything going on.
Kathy
http://gigglingtruckerswife.blogspot.com
Yes somehow he forgot to ‘see’ her and kept gazing at her eyes. 🙂
Thank you Kathy
Hehe nicely written! Perfectly applicable in today’s world…
Thank you Meghna and welcome to SS