I looked at the winding road ahead
the trees by the side swaying and welcoming
The car moved forward steadily
the din inside deafening,
I battled with my thoughts
some confused
and some doubts
jumbled
Lost!!
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A nonet written for Write tribe, my first ever nonet.
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Sad yet lovely nonet! You crafted a beautiful imagery…She should listen to her heart, erase out the noise and take on a new path!
She should 🙂 Thanks Aditi
Lovely! Somehow I am not able to write a Nonet! 😦
My first attempt Jyothi and not so good but still wanted to give it a try 😦
Beautiful thoughts. Will need to do some reading on this Nonet thing. 🙂
Please do and then present a brilliant one 🙂
Quite good for a first attempt! 🙂 I thought we had to keep the syllable count from 9 to 1.. but I could be wrong.. nonets are new to me too 😐
Thanks Vaisakh, Yes the syllables have to count from 9 to 1 or vice versa. I did dount the syllable line by line at wordcalc. com because I was a bit confused. 🙂
Interestingly done!
PS: I remember writing a nonnet once. Will send it across to you once. You brought forth such memories. 🙂
🙂 Thanks Debo. Waiting to read yours
Beautiful, Bhagya:) It’s so tough to write a Nonet and I feel that I haven’t done justice to mine:)
You have Vishal, I loved your take 🙂